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The worst part is when you can still taste it

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And those days when You start to clot in my blood again and

Even bile would taste sweeter

 

And those spaces in between my teeth where the unsaid words stalk

Like silent vandals waiting to burn straight through my gums

Until my teeth don't quite fall out and i still

Have to talk to You

 

And those days when i gag at my own reflection

Because if You're not in the sink in front of me

You're trickling down my esophagus to make a home of

That sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach

 

And those sulfur memories that scorch my nose until

The tears spring out again and

i can feel myself suffocating on the fist in my mouth

 

i wish it tasted sweeter

i wish we tasted sweet like i remember when i remember what we

(never really) had but would like to have been able to remember

Because You're definitely not going anywhere, are You?

 

No way i can purge You outta me now because You're

Tangled in my ribcage

Echoing through an empty chest cavity

 

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Why don't You build a toxic next while You're here and eat me apart from the inside again?

 

 

 

 

 

The worst part is when you can still taste it.


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(Sorry, as I'm still getting back into the swing of things on dA. >.<" I have so many messages to get back to and faves to thank for. Please be patient, my beautiful watchers. :heart: Also, I don't know if I really consider this one finished, since there's still some things I don't like, but it's sort of been festering in my dA stash, so I thought I might as well post it. *shrugs* :/ )
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theonetruefish Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student General Artist
That's a really descriptive, incredible metaphor. You're freaking me out here on this whole "love" thing. jeez! Hope you can find the time to indulge us more with your work ;)
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1CrazyVegetarian Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
Aw, Demyx! ;w; Thank you so much, buddy. :heart: Sheesh, I really need to get back on dA. That comment was from like January. *headdesks*

Also, LOL I wonder if I'll ever write non-disturbing "love" poems. Hmmm...
NAHHHHHH ;)
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theonetruefish Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student General Artist
DON'T STOP PLEASE D: nonononononono those are the best >:) *disturbing grin/chuckle*
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1CrazyVegetarian Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
LOL Demmy, I love you. Come back to Rampart and gambol psychotically with me through the hallways. ;w;

Also, don't worry. I'm pretty sure there are plenty more disturbing metaphorical things where those came from. xP :iconlachoirplz: (I MISSED THESE IRRELEVANT ICONS!!! HAVEN'T BEEN ON DA IN SO LONG UGH)
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theonetruefish Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student General Artist
OH MY ODIN THAT IS THE BEST ICON THING I HAVE EVER SEEN EVER.

EVER.
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1CrazyVegetarian Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
AHAHAH THANK YOU! x3

God, I love the "la" icons. :iconironmanlaplz:

GO FORTH, MY ADORABLE ARMY!!!!

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theonetruefish Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student General Artist
IRON MAN SUIT HAS A TONGUE.
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1CrazyVegetarian Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
LOL I bet it spits fire or something. Tony wouldn't add that in for nothing.
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CoCoWantaCookie Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Wow....
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1CrazyVegetarian Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
*sigh* Pathetic, yes?

:hug: I miss youuuuu! :heart:
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