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I wonder if she could suck the fear from the marrow in my bones

And replace it with a different kind

 

And open me up like a book

And leave coffee stains and fingerprints

And write what her definition of hope is

I was really considering not posting this because it's just a little free-verse clump I found while browsing through one of my notebooks from several months ago. I haven't scanned a lot of things I've been meaning to post on here yet, though, so this is what you guys get until I'm not too lazy to post something legitimate.

Also, I'm sorry I've still been slow getting back on dA. There's a lot of things going on at home right now that don't leave too much flexibility.

Hope you enjoy! :heart:
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witwitch Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Student Writer
Somehow I feel like this poem starts stronger than it ends. But I like what is being expressed. :)
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Rain-Sapphire Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
interesting piece
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staplesponge Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
We all feel the need to dump poetry on DA every once in a while...or at least I do.
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Anyways, nice poem! Very touching, as it shows we all need a bit of support when we're feeling down and hopeless...though this poem makes me feel oddly hungry...
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todAysFire Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very creative! :)
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